My votes are for Susan Ching and Yan Wen.
Comments:
1) Bill Blume More lopsided faces. Ugh. When I draw them, they don't seem lopsided. It takes a couple days for me to realize that it looks as if I traced around a potato. I should never have drawn the Marksman,(the guy in the tank-top), with a broken leg. I wanted to give an impression that they barely survived a massive fight. But how do you make a man with a broken leg look like that he is running for his life?
2) Dot Warner You need to work on your proportions, especially the proportions between characters. In some of your frames, your men looked like that they were 8 foot tall goliaths in relation to the women.
3) Susan Ching Excellent artwork. I really like both the linework and the creative use of grey scales. Good story. Noan Jael is getting pretty popular at MOM, isn't he.
4) Julie Bihn Nice story. I think that it is better drawn than last month. I know I complained last month that writing all in uppercase makes it more difficult to read, but I didn't have that problem this month, so I retract that. Twenty pages? Don't you sleep? ^_^ Keep on drawing.
5) Yume I really liked how you drew your first page.
6) Kasumiko Welcome to MOM! Nicely drawn and colored.
7) Ed Bangalon "Dong, Dong, Dong, Splat!" :-). Well drawn. I really liked your mech design.
8) wxp I do like your comics. Its just that I can't follow your stories. Rather than leaving MOM, why don't you draw a character/story introduction page, like what Yan Wen does?
9) Kenji Watanabe I liked the story. Keep on drawing!
10) Meow Kitty Silly ^_^
11) Tang I really liked your story. Its nice to see a good science fiction story for a change. (Most commercial "science fiction" out there nowdays are really more science fantasy than science fiction.) Its also well drawn. Looking forward to part 2.
12) Idres I like your character designs. Your characters are a little stiff. (I feel guilty about saying that, being that my artwork has the same problem, if not more so.) Also, when you draw black hair on a black background, use a white line or backlighting to separate it from the background.
13) Yan Wen Another appearance of Noan Jael. That guy gets around ^_^. Very funny and very well drawn.
14) Nutz Sad but excellently drawn. I really like your ink washes.
15) Melancholy Chinese I like the design of the armored suits.
~~Bill Blume